Wątek: How to continue the story? I have no idea

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1 z 3: DianaCician

So.
I'm writing a story about a girl named lisa who fell in love with a guy named daniel but he is dating a girl named amanda.
One day Lisa and Amanda meet by coincidence at a restaurant, and there Lisa finds out that Daniel cheated on Amanda with a girl named Emelia.
Lisa has a father who had to abandon her when she was younger under threats from Lisa's grandfather who had a company in France. Lisa believes that he, who is now under the name of Axel, cheated on her mother when the truth is that his grandfather threatened him that if he didn't come to France something bad would happen to him. And since the old man died of cancer while today's Axel, he had to change his identity to Axel, taking care of the company of his father and with the money ordered a Frenchman, Gilbert, to spy his daughter.
Gilbert gets tired and decides to change his identity without leaving a trace and faking his death.
We have a cop, Ivan, who knows about Gilbert's new identity because he found out from a guy that one of his colleagues arrested him for drugs but he won't tell him.
While Amanda thinks if she will forgive Daniel and Lisa still has hope and no ideas about what's up far away in France.
Any ideas about how the story could be continued?
BTW here you have the story (attached file).
Signed by, no one in particular.
03.02.2022 07:44

2 z 3: Normale_Flasche

mmm. You could get Danny back with Amanda and Lisa find someone good for her.
Although, to be honest, I want to see him suffer a bit because I understand how Lisa feels xd.
On the other hand, with those from France, a quite interesting drama could be made.
Just think.
I mean, it's going to be better than my mother's Mexican soap operas, depending on what you write :D
...Annemarie
03.02.2022 09:38

3 z 3: JHRadio

Wow sounds very confusing.

09.07.2022 01:36